Tulips on Paper
Ray Bidegain

Tulips on Paper

This is a new image for me. It is an 8x10 paltinum/palladium print. I welcome your feedback.

ray
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oregon
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By the way, what was your ratio plat.to pall. ?
 
Ray

A well executed image. I would however trim out the shadow on top right corner to balance.

Phill
 
Lovely, well thought out which makes it look easy, but we all know how difficult that is to pull off.
 
It's beautiful, but it's derivative. There's a lot of people out there doing flowers on platinum. I just wouldn't let the beauty of the medium get in the way of a unique personal vision. This is a lovely study, on the way to greater things I'm sure.
 
Very Nice, I like the way the (2) little strings of Plant (Horizontal, small) at the base of the bouquet tie in with the wrinkled paper. I'm not sure about messing with the Shadow in UR corner. Adds depth and I find my eye goes there and then bounces right back into the image starting with the similar tones in the flowers. Not a bad thing.
 

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