Root Torrent

• mark

• Aug 29, 2019

I like it. If you don't mind me saying so, the only thing I would change is the foreground roots. I would like them the same as the middle roots.

 

• henpe

• Aug 29, 2019

Nice composition! The softness of the water is appropriate and I like the roots in the foreground. Maybe the highlights in the background can be printed down a tiny bit? Great work!

/henrik

 

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  tnp651

• Aug 29, 2019

I like it. The roots contrast nicely with the flowing water, and the sunlight in the upper left balances everything out. Well seen!

 

• bluechromis

• Aug 29, 2019

@mark Thanks Mark that's good suggestion. I hadn't thought of it because a pool of light was hitting just on the middle roots, so is how the scene was. But that can be changed in print and I will try that.

 

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  tnp651

• Nov 7, 2019

My preference is to leave the lower-left roots dark. If you lighten them, they lead the eye out of the frame too quickly. The mass of bright roots is also approximately the size and shape of the bright water which I like. I think the print is perfect as it it.