Towering

just workin' on gettin' some good camra angel
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Oregon
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minolta maximum 4
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I'm sorry there isn't much to my eye to like. The composition is ok, but the part of the building we get is pretty dead the sky is way dead and the extra steeple doesn't add much, but a little balance.

You really need to spot -- really

fixes

Like a previous post... Move around and shoot from many angles. If the sky is dead come back another day or do something about it (such as not include it)
 
Gotta agree mostly with MrCallow. However I like the camera angle, and overall it has that dark, foreboding feel about it, which kind of works for me.
In architecture, it's important to get your depth of field correct. The very top looks a little soft. This may have been your intention, but I'm guessing it wasn't. To fix it use the narrowest aperture setting (& tripod if nec). It may have been necessary to use the hyperfocal distance setting for your lens in this case. lots of info about that on the net and ref books if you need it.
 
I've noticed with your building shot you tend to like the top and are always pointing upwards.from a purely portfolio view(if this is your ultimate intention)you may want to put a little diversity in there.there have been alot of good photos from Sweden and Mexico as of late in this site that maybe you could get some inspiration from.
 

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